求高人帮我翻译一段文章 中译英

楼上显然不合语法，又是在线翻译吧~~

The“Who has the biggest brain”is a very interesting intellectual game,and have various types of questions.Because of the game is limited by time,though the questions are easy enough,the players have to fast enough and have great judgment in order to finish more questions efficiently.The appearance is plain but exquisite,and the cheerful background music made the players from nervous to pleased.When the test has down,no matter the score is high or low,the comment and a proper picture always makes people smile.However,there're some shortcomings in the game,and I have some advices for it:

1.The loading time is too long when start the game,take meatures to accelerate the loading speed.

2.In the test of “memory test”,the cue of “press any key”should be put in the center of the screen.Some carelessly players would not notice the small words at the bottom,so they may wast their time to wait the system's order.

The other game called “minigolf”is a great game for leisure.The exquisite appearance,richful scenes and the simple way to operate fits different people of any ages.The proper music makes people calm whlie the sound of the ball collides the wall is vivid.There're various styles of clothes,clubs（球杆）,shoes and pants etc,people could buy some of the properties to make up their own character in the game and show their special characteristic.All the details makes the game more colorful,but some aspects are need to be improved.

1.Before impacting,gives a close up to the club and the character would be more attractive and vivid.

2.When people makes a “hole in one”(一杆进洞)，it's better to have some flowers and colorful ribbons waft around to make the mood vivid.

3.When practice,there should be a function“replay”,if people can not pass this level,they couldn't have to start from the very begining.

4.Make a "power bar"espeically which could make the game more human-based.The order is:choose the direction,clik the left button of the mouse to confirm,then the power bar appears,one more click to confirm the power and impact the ball.

哎哟可算翻完了，我都不好意思说我翻了多长时间，但是是逐字翻译的昂，没用软件，翻得都饿了，高尔夫知识都增长了不少~！

那个高尔夫球杆的问题，我查了百科，球杆分好多种，什么一号二号三号的，club是统称，就用了这个,还有一杆进洞，都是专业术语，查的我眼都绿了，睡觉去了。

(楼下的建议说的对哦，我虚心接受哦都改好了，下面的应该没错了吧，哎理解万岁吧，我翻到半夜脑子都木了~第一句错了也不代表整篇都错吧，你说是吧~)