英文改错，My hometown-Xinjiang

Hello everyone, I would like to give all of you a brief description of my hometown-Heshuo. It belongs to Xinjiang province which is a beautiful place with fancy scenery and minority folk-customs. The most amazing and distinctive part about Xinjiang is its geography. There are three mountain ranges surronding two basins. And the weather is different from other areas. People would wear winter coats in the early moring and put on as less as cloth in the afternoon. Certainly, you must have heard of this before, but how well do you know about Heshuo?

My hometown is not a big city with an approximate population of sixty thousands.However the climate is more constant and warm.The people here are very nice, friendly and helpdul. For me it is a enjoyable city to live, full of happiness. Different from these morden cities, the living stress are less here and the government is indeed very efficient. We also produce all kinds of friuts. Such as watermelons, cantaloups, badams and so on. Grapes are the most tasty fruit in Heshuo. It has achieced several international awards, and the economy is developing greatly thank for this popular special local product.

This is my hometown, please have a visit and you will never forget！

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